Walking up this lonely dotted path
My darkened angel spreads her blood-soaked wings
Breathing the breath of life so cleverly
And her sore, cut open heart sings
She cowers in her shredded clothing
Until the blistering sun falls in the distance
She'll simply kiss away your salty tears
Bringing you fear with such persistence
Put her in your tearing pocket
Release her gently in the wild
Watch her reap your filthy soul
You empty, worthless child.
Author notes
idk, it might be alright? hope it's okay.
A contest entry
- Splattered Ink (quickie) only 3 spots left!!!!!!!!!!! hurry! by Rejected Easter Egg.
440 points, ended March 14, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - so..how about the bronze winners now? by Cat10.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thank you for entering! I love this poem! great rhyme and flow! you did an absolutly amamzing job! good luck in the contest!
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wow, i really liked the imagery in this poem. it flowed very nicely as well. the second stanza is my favroite. awesome write.
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that was definetely an interesting interpretation of my prompt. And I enjoyed reading it throughly. Good Luck! The contest will be over soon
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