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It All Went Up In Flames

Burning skin
Blood dripping down gravestones
Defying the glaze once given by rain
Blood curdling screams
Tears spearing the dirt with such intensity
Nails ripping back, scratching at the etchings
Bodies turn to ashes; memories turn to dust
Barbed wire choking throats
Rose pedals covering the burning sins
Live and let be, burn emotions away

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    Wow very dark, I love it. The graphic imagery is awesome. Superbly penned. All the best in the contest with it


  • tony yates silver member
    March 14, 2008
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    powerful

    lovely wording, well structured, thanks and good luck