what makes me ME
is the pain
that i have been through
it was hard
to get what ive
become inside and out
my out side is just there
but my inside was created
by hits,swears,and even
maybe being heartbreaking
finding me
is just a sign
that my life isnt together
but what is me
holds me together
findimg yourself
takes forever
it took me thirteen years
to know i was hurting
A contest entry
- Who are you, really? by look for tomorrow.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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WOW, I love it, i wrote a similar poem a while back, I know how it feels and believe me, I don't want to go there again, took a lot out of me, and I'm just now starting to recover
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