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Huge spot in heart

Few are names
whose glance
sprinkles a smile,
and among toppers
is my 'lil angel.
A sister sweet
I find in Rhianna,
and feel my childhood twinkles
in her precious poems,
her unabashed love
just brims me with warmth
as I am blessed
to hold her as my friend,
my sister.

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Love you lots 'lil sis

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 21, 2008

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    That is such a pretty poem for Rhi... absolutely love and I'm sure she appreciates it. You are lucky to have each other.

    Beautifully written!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    March 15, 2008
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    This fits our little one nicely.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 14, 2008

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    Awwwww this is a very nice little dedication to your ap sis Hope she likes it and good luck in the contest with it


  • TheClimb
    March 14, 2008

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    Awww sis, this is sure to bring a smile to our angel's face! , I love the background too...nice one!

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