Dear God Almighty in heaven above
Is it wrong for materials to receive my love
You see I have this problem that no one knows
And my addiction for it continually grows
It just started out as a game
But now Satan has hold of me by his chain
God I have no clue as to what to do
So here I am coming to You
Lord I know I can't do this by myself
Lord I need this addiction to be put on a shelf
This needs to be gone before people condemn
All these things I ask in your name forever amen.
Author notes
This is a poem i wrote a long time ago. and it is one that i like a lot still today.
A contest entry
- anything goes 10 lines of poetry by tony yates.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BECAUSE YOU ARE MY FAVS by Swan song.
3000 points, ended April 5, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Exellent rhyme and clearly shows the pain and problems of addiction and the hope of God to help. Well done dear
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This was really good. The way you use your words give us a glimps into what you are feeling as you write this.. Great write..
Peace to you, Jetleena -
very good
interesting and well written, thank you and good luck -
my stomache tells me i should through up! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr no points for you
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lol that was the past and you should know that
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