Happiness,
Is not my thing,
I don't hear it when it sings.
Joy,
Is merely a facade,
I simply pass it with a nod.
All these things are very true,
That is...
Until I think of you.
My heart starts racing,
My soul is free,
When I think of you and me.
I no longer give emotions a cold stare,
Thanks to you,
emotions find me everywhere.
A contest entry
- Live, Laugh, Love by aligurl.
425 points, ended October 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Love poem. ;D
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Oh I really liked this. I know exactly what you are talking about and it made my heart smile to remember. I don't know if you meant it this way but too me, the whole "Thanks to you, emotions find me everywhere." Added a nice humerous touch. Well thats How I felt it and it made me laugh. thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
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this is soo sweet and touching. i like it.
"My heart starts racing,
My soul is free,
When I think of you and me." <- favourite part
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Awww thats so sweet! This poem gave me a real fuzzy feeling when you started talking about love.
and coz emotion has found you, you were able to express it. I felt it and i loved it!
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Great. Shows how one true connection can change our whole perception of love. The flow is nice and even until the last line, when you change it up a little. Pleasant sing-song rhyme. Thanks for sharing.
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