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Abandoned


I lie upon this bed of loneliness with your kisses still tangled with in these sheets. Your scent upon my pillow drowning this passion that is so elusively out of my reach! Each night I am a captive, a slave to the abandon this desire has stirred with me. Why did you stoke this fire only to walk away leaving me with no way to quench this desire? Have you ever known the ache of wanting another's touch only to stretch out your hand that returns so empty and hushed? When I close my eyes the memory of our last kiss replays itself against the backdrop of eyelids that rain torrents of tears! Afraid to forget, afraid to remember how I would melt every time you drew yourself near! These brick walls around my heart shall never be stripped nor torn apart. With out you to caress this aching breast now so abandoned by you!

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This is for, HE, who has left my heart to absolute abandon! option: http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/ddi34/debs2vi/mulher%20sensual/fbc8.jpg

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  • joleahe
    April 2, 2008
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    very emotional piece....good job


  • Dragonbabyx3
    March 22, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This, This is amazing. The flow, the form, the feeling, You truly see yourself reaching across the bed to find no one there. I love this, its beautiful


    • sapphireangelwings
      March 22, 2008
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      Thank you! I can say this for abandonement...it sure leaves a great springboard for my muse! LOL