Black wings against a dark sky
I see you fly.
I watch with awe,
as I see fire from your maw;
envelop the world below
and set it all aglow.
Beautiful yet terrible,
you're hardly comparable;
to the pictures on the wall,
with the fear you install.
It's amazing to think
that you bring to the brink
all of man's wonders;
with your wings' thunders.
A creature from fiction
was our affliction.
You were our killer
yet it's such a chiller
to be so naieve;
now I believe,
you're our saviour.
Author notes
A dragon's judgement on the world below so that like the pheonix from the ashes it may arise anew.
yeah...it's wierd but hey it rhymes. Kinda.
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Nice and descriptive here, I like it. I also like the word maw in this, it's a different word but very nice. Mystical and prettyful
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Thanks I'm glad you do! Heh yeah I quite like the word maw especialy in this context. Thanks again I do like being different.
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faye faye this is absoltuly awsome I just love how your imagination works and the way you can paint a story
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My imagination runs away with me sometimes. Hehehe it IS a story and one I may write someday
Thanks char!
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