Love is something
That cannot be truly explained.
But some try to
In their own way.
Love is love
and that is that.
Nothing can change it
No matter what you say,
No matter what you do.
A contest entry
- My love's birthday by Meroza.
425 points, ended March 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Love Poems by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Judging:
- Title: it fits the poem perfectly.
- Is it what I am looking for? Both yes and no.
- Emotions: it is so full of love and cuteness.
- Wowness: Poor wowness.
- Final word: The poem is fantastic but way to short. I wish to see more.
Good write -
This poem is cute, but a bit short, still like it tho
Best of luck

