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Friends

Are we friends?
What is a friend?
Friends share when they are hurt,
scared or afraid.

They share their dreams, hopes
fears they never challenge
or withdraw from each other
Why am I so afraid to have them?
Are you my friend?
I hope we can be real good friends  

 

 

 

 

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  • z etoile
    August 4, 2008
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    great poem on friendship. thankyou for taking the time to read my poetry. keep writing.


  • Rheea gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    you are right to be cautious... to many say yea then you really know them and they you and the yelling begins and it spells friend DIVORCE ah ti's true people are not cookies in a pack no more like rocks in the drive.. not diamonds but very necessary and wanted. But like cookies a few are just enough and too many leave your tummy hurting. trying to sound wise here.. i really do not have a clue do I ? Lovely write here.

  • Nighttime angel
    March 16, 2008

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    this is a really nice poem that you have written here. friends are people who care about you, are there for you through everything, who want the best for you and not for themselves.. great subject you chose to write about. one suggestion though try to remember to use spell check.. spelling error first stanza line 4. scrd = scared. affraid =afraid. 2nd stanza 4th line, affraid =afraid.

    thank you for entering & good luck

    kat


  • Angel Wings1960
    March 14, 2008

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    What are your hopes and dreams? Are you afraid of friends or relationships? that is the question you need to ask yourself.

    I would like to be your friend.