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Two Words

Maybe this could make a difference,
Change the way they think of me,
It won't take much time,
I only have to say two words,

Walking through the doors,
Of my unforgetable past,
Wondering if this will work,
But then I catch a glimpse,

Forget about the words,
I rush into the bathroom,
Where everything began,
And the place where it'd end,

The sound of a single creeking door,
To the stall at the end,
Little subtle sobs,
From the unknow little girl,

Walk slowly,
With the sound of heart beats,
And quick breaths,
slowly...coldly....

In
and
out,

Out
and
in,

Place a palm to the door,
Cold to the touch,
But maybe not,
Warm to the feelings,

Of the unsuspecting stranger,
In the bathroom,
At the end,
In a ball,

Her breath goes and comes,
With rhythm unknown,
I stand and stare,
As her breath goes...

In
and
out,

Out
and
in,

The clock ticks,
Yes, there's a clock,
Away the time,
Away her life,

I try to speak,
Though no words come out,
I'm only here for two,
So I say in the softest of voices,

One...tock
Two...tick
Three...tock
Four...tick
Five...

I'm Sorry...

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  • Dirty and Broken
    March 14, 2008
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    wow...this is....amazing.....just...wow....


  • xRigoRxMortiSx
    March 14, 2008
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    as always

    i like it...your cute shit...


    • Rize
      August 9
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      i just reread over your comment and i have to agree i am cute shit. arn't i?