The tangled roots of restless dreamers yearn
seeds crawling upwards, clinging like the vine
to bare foundations of hearts hopeful turn
A wistful bud seeking lover’s sunshine
fulfillment branching in another’s arms
softened kisses melting winter with wine
A wave of rustling splendor slowly charms
dormant desires from hibernation’s clasp
wreathes rung ‘round, warding against subtle harm
Eternal shimmer of salvation’s grasp
match for match our love glimmers vibrant green
twined together, molded like the coiled asp
Unfolding blossoms jointly set the scene
culmination quickened by Nature’s sheen
Author notes
Terza Rima Sonnet, Decasyllabic
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425 points, ended March 27, 2008, 14 entries
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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I'm sorry but I have to remove this from the contest since it has won trophies. Wonderful write, and congratulations on your prior wins.
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whisper
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Very strong piece here... Another meter. I have figured out it is not the actual syllables, it's the stressed/unstressed of meter that confuses me! Anyway, this is very strong with rich vocabulary but not overwwhelming, unlegible words.
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Judging:
- Title: Yes it do fit the poem.
- Is it what I am looking for? yes.
- Emotions: Full of love.
- Wowness: Good.
- Final word: I love the way you have placed the words and the meaning in it, wonderfull! -
Excellent
I see all the meanings in this. This is excellent, nothing to change here. It stands a proud. You are an excellent poet.
alby
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Nice, I especially like the last line. Nicely done here
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I loved this. It was so serene and calm. It was sweet and captivating. Thank you for this AMAZING entry. However, please add your author's name and what position you would like to hold in my AP family in your author's notes. ^.^
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Absolutely lovely and so serene!!! It captivates the readers soul and draws them deep into the piece!! You are indeed very gifted to be able to achieve such a thing!! Wonderful and best of luck in the contests
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VEry peacfull and toughtfull, brava
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This poem is good, I really like the way you have placed the words, the meaning in it all.
Good work
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