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Love Or Somthing Like It (A Haiku)

Anxious heart beats;
He is looking my way.
I exhale;
"Hello." falls from my lips.
Success or rejection?
Love or fear?
Breathing shallow, an anxious symptom
of love or somthing like it.

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  • xRAYEx
    March 17, 2008
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    i like haikus... i just totally suck at following rules lol


  • MyDecember
    March 14, 2008
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    LOVE IT.
    actually. glad you didnt stick to the classic haiku.