Let my fingertips
envelope your bare skin,
as if warm, soft rains
are falling from the clouds above
caressing you as they fall…
Let them ignite your passions…
Imagine my kisses
replacing my fingers
as our passions grow
heightening the love between us…
Let these rains come often
within your life…
Let them wash over you…
Let our love grow deep
within your very soul…
Imagine with me,
M’lady love…
Let our hearts
meld as they have
so many times before…
© Jonathan Wikkins March 14, 2008
All Rights Reserved
In a list
A contest entry
- Rain Angel by Reptile Lady { Adult Only} by Reptile Lady.
850 points, ended March 21, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
A very well done piece. Very descriptive and creative. Congrats on the honorable mention.
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magical babe i think you are very delicate with the choosing of words you use on here i think you did a very great job to me this is gold
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Nicely done and easy to read. I'm not much for erotic literature othe than the one you read. I think it requires a softer touch than mine. But this one's good. Happy trails neighbor.
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Imagery and sensuality are screaming out to me in this write. Good choice on the background as well. Bravo!!
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Well now, this is a bit um...sensuous
Very nicely done 
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Sensual elegance rinsed with the beauty of this poem.
Warmth of passion is felt through out
Thank you for your entry and Good Luck
Julie
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Very nice read, I suppose I should of came here first and learned a few things before my attempt, I will enjoy reading more of your writes I can tell already,
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beautiful
really enjoyed read, so nice
i felt hands and love caress me
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Sweet and soft and very sensual. My only criticism must come from the second line - fingertips could not envelope anything - even fingers couldn't - hands, maybe.
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Outstanding!
This was exquisite Mike! Ok...so I'm a sucker for soft sensual poetry, and I'm a sucker for rain...and for any man who says M'Lady. Put all that aside and this is still such a softly passionate piece. Makes me just want to sigh....
Very nice!
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