never thought id see the day,
I can make it go away,
Seems this is the only way,
you see the times they change,
changing things don`t seem so strange,
I am hoping I can find,
where to leave my hurt behind!!!!
All this Hell I seem to take,
ten times more I seem to make,
can I see or are am I blind,
am I to be left behind?????
I know that I stand alone,
Can't be on my own,
Now I see the times they change,
leaving doesn't seems so strange,
I am hoping I can find,
where to leave my hurt behind,
All this Hell I seem to take,
ten times more seem to make,
can you see or are you blind,
are you to be left behind?????
Now I see the times they change,
changing things don`t seem so strange,
can I see or am I blind,
are I to be left behind?????
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this is a pretty good angsty poem. I like it. one question though is the last one ment to be "are I"? because I would understand if it was soposed to be about a multipersonality disorder too.. lol
well either way
good job
good luck
thanks for entering -
well this to me seems to be a cheap cutoff of KoRn's "Alone i Break"
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