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You Know I Love You

 

 

 

For it is unspoken and paraded gleefully

with bannered beauty, in colors

rivaling spring itself

 

are my emotions, never forced and

you know I love you,

 

with a focused fervor, I am

a keen ray that burns through any

obstacle set before us and

 

nothing can thwart my passion

in the least because, you know I love you

 

so you have but to look into my eyes

to see a truth that is not trying to hide, no

not even were I deaf and blind because

 

my every action and nuance would loudly

proclaim to you; you know I love you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Written in the spirit of, "Here I Love You" by the great Pablo Neruda. I hope this is satisfactory.

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  • Cotton Kandy Love
    March 20
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    This is a very beautiful poem you have written here !

  • Layne..
    March 15

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    So lovely

    " my every action and nuance would loudly
    proclaim to you; you know I love you."

    -this is what I needed to read first thing this morning, this wonderful plauge of true love, so sweet it is..............

    -Layne






  • Faithbound gold member
    March 14

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    If only everyone who was in love spoke this honestly about it..sigh.


  • Margaret Denham
    March 14

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    You give so much of yourself to so many with your words and caring heart.




  • Dalaney gold member
    March 14

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    Michael, you've dipped that pen of yours into your heart again, I see Truly beautiful... love, lane


  • ardentMarch gold member
    March 14

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    that is one of my favorite poems..

    this is beautiful...

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    March 14

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    oh daddy the love and devotion in this piece is so beautifully written with a strong heartbeat in it hehe well done


  • BellaD
    March 14

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    Lovely!

    A beautiful poem that does justice to the poem that inspired it. More than satisfactory.


  • Wild Mustang
    March 14

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    Aww, you wrote this for me, Michael? How sweet.

    I'm kidding, I'm kidding . Very well written though. I usually tire of when people reuse a set of words, but you pulled it off! Heartwarming piece. As are many of your works. Great job, friend.

  • John Veinot Sr.
    March 14

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    this reminds me of one I wrote...
    hey; maybe thats why I like your writing.
    kind of feels like home...

    Thanks for the morning read.

    and 's for you today as well!!


  • Nature Song silver member
    March 14

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    You have but to look into my eyes to know that I love you! Simple and so profound! Bro...you have exceled on this one for sure! Love it ~Sie


  • Ace13
    March 14

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    it's pretty good

    I don't care much for potry that doesn't rhyme.


    But this is truely poetry so ....
    1bagillion imagenary $$$$$$$$$$ for you

  • ashjoe76
    March 14

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    :)

    I am

    a keen ray that burns through any

    obstacle set before us and



    nothing can thwart my passion

    in the least


    Oh man, I simply wish I could write like this!


  • Mrs.Wilson
    March 14
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    this is great hun


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 14

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    I know nothing of this poet, but your words inspired by his definitely make me want to find out more about him!

    This is just beautiful! I can say no more than that.... just... so beautiful!
    Well done MJ!

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