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On The Mind

Stop the fucking
Your concern over multiplying
Is impossible
Everyone wants to turn in

You can't just lie down?

You are not innately
Tied to romanticism
It's all fucking to you
In and out. In and out.

You can't turn me into
A territory.

You can get it somewhere
Else
Turn in to the stable
In Bethlehem

Or you can go to a rehab
Centre?

Kick the fucking habit
I'm abnormal
I don't want to fuck you
I'm flying from normal

I'm sorry. You will turn me
Into your lover.

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  • janejainejayne gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    Bravo!

    Dear Anthony,
    I loved this one...
    It made me want to drink Scotch and pass out!!!

    'Kick the fucking habit
    I'm abnormal
    I don't want to fuck you
    I'm flying from normal'

    I can't tell why I related to these lines...
    something to do with me and Tennessee Williams
    I think...it hit on some nerve.

    Today is the Ides of March and this was suitable to this day...you did a great job with this one.
    Bravo! Jane