I just want someone to walk in front and ill follow them
to my very last breath i want someone to hold me
tightly from all the evil in the big world before me
to hide me from danger and heartbreak
to be there when in sad
to make me happy
keep me safe from the drugs, drink and smoke
to show me a way to live in the right
a partner to watch over me, through dark day and night
they never would let me
fly far from their sight
they would just love me
forever,
always
and tonight xx
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is really good and a poem anyone could relate to. Everybody wants to find somebody like that and to just feel secure and warm inside. Good job and thanks for entering....
but.. hey!
look at the rules. (hint: put your option in notes!)
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I didn't know if you did it on purpose or from mistake but there are two lower case I's in your poem.
This line here :
" ill follow them " - I'll follow them
Then the second line - " breath i want " - breath I want
Other then that the poem is good, and I hope that you get your wish!
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