The way your body wanders is placed under
a conspicuous haze;
streetlights fill the skyline,
and this city life is glowing in a maze of mixing colors--
which I can't seem to separate through the wing feathers holding me down.
The nightlife has it's upsides;
and the way your eyes shift onto mine takes brilliancy
to a whole new level;
soft whimpers and stargrinds fill their way into
parked cars . . . and the constant glancing at blinking time
in broken clocks.
I've heard it called glamorous;
but improper grammar turns the most significant sentences
unnecessarily complex throughout a lack of words;
an excess of thoughts.
Your heart beats double under curious fingertips;
tracing scars into your skin-- and
spilling a thousand stanzas into your mouth;
hoping you'll swallow a small amount of our misery,
digest it,
and never hear of it again.
I lost myself inside of the stammers of voices and
the constant ringing in my head and otherwise;
interrupting my solitary confinement with reminders of
stress and development to the guilt I was becoming a prisoner to;
-- the injections of medication I was dripping into you.
. . . and you drip into me;
like bloodlust and cracking trust.
Our surroundings were cloudy;
and no light could get through,
save the light that shined in my eyes while I
let myself fall into you--
and tried to let go of my memory.
Your evidence is apparent;
stains on crumpled up letters,
though no one can tell whether
words or pictorial sanctuaries graced it's temporary stardom.
Sometimes I think I must have dreamed you up;
and these memories are little more than REM dazes--
but then I breathe,
only to realize you are the air that surrounds me.
Author notes
This is a rewrite I did of "seven times three" sometime this month.
I basically cleaned up the original.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Looks just like the original to me. Just as brilliant as ever. The unusual spacing kind-of gave it its personality on screen, but oh well.



