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Money on my mind

Bigger, better, richer, faster.
It's the riches I am after.

Build and grow,
expand the sweet city glow.

Ethics? Crazy stuff.
Nature we will snuff!

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  • Freestyle Bushido
    March 14, 2008
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    very nice and flow with this prompt, and a deep message behind this write. Thanks for entering .


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    I like the underlying message in this piece, nicely put in so few words. Superbly penned