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- Crest of Basilisk -

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Civilized Westerners wanted control, dreamt of keys
to kingdom where gates were ivory grains on shore
in paradise kept pure of humanity's plague.

Ships docked, demanded entrance blocked by stones
which glowed of iron deposits shaped in intricate designs
glyphs bathed within artistic announcements bordered.

Serpents coiled in pits under and around erected throne
on highest mountain closest to heavens, stars reflected
primordial crest of Basilisk worshipped as demigod
by primitive inhabitants never captured on film.

Jungle patchwork played with psyche, set rules in place
for anyone who attempted to cross venomous threshold;

met with vines and viscerated, their last recollection
inside lair with survivors littered, their screams left to die.

Enchantress seized the life force from each Mortal
and charged her sceptre, haulted the aging process
another decade until more dared to challenge again.




Author notes

Picture Prompt~
http://didi-mc.deviantart.com/art/Gwyl-Canol-Hydref-40632787

15-20Lines...

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1. Name [Real & User] Sunshine & Desire
2. Age: 38
3. Amount of Poetic Experience: Since 2003
4. Typical/Strongest Style: Flexible-Usually Free Verse
5. Unusual/Weakest Style: Forms- mirrored...
6. Favorite Type of Inspiration: Everybody I read
7. Amount of Multiround Experience: Since 2006
8. Some Accomplishments: Realized some people understood my writing...
9. One Fact I Don’t Know About You: I don't smoke...
10. Additional Comments You’d Like Me To Read:
I agree with the guidelines...

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  • blackday
    March 22, 2008

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    Where do I start here? You really painted the descriptions well. I cannot deny that. This type of write isn't exactly I'm favorite. It's just not my cup of tea. But I appreciate the fact this is good enough though it wasn't what I was expecting from you. I was looking for something with a stark meaning. Maybe I didn't catch it? I'm probably having an off day. haha :]]

    Well, Madame Desire, here's your link to the group. :]

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/project%20poetry


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 15, 2008

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    Bravo
    I am blown away by the beauty of this write, from that picture you just explode with wisdom and imagery

    Congratulation on the Gold hun

    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda


  • Swan song gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    This was truly awesome you are brilliant!
    One thing I like about your poetry is how it easily flows and joins together. That takes talent


  • jcat gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    This was absolutely stunning!!! You wove the most incredible story in a most amazing poetic form!! This was so very deserving of the GOLD!!! I am thrilled to see that it won!!! You are a very talented lady and it is always a treat to read your pieces!! Much love and the greatest respect


    Jodi


  • HaleyMary
    March 14, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Sis. Powerful imagery and wonderful take on the pic. The pic actually made me think of this knighthood game I was playing a few days ago. Keep writing.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    wow grandma your words speak alot of depth to make the picture come to life. i love it and the backgroun well done


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 14, 2008
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    I like the background too


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 14, 2008

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    Excellent Dear Great imagery and word use Good luck with this in the contest.


  • penman gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    Excellent

    Another truly breathtaking creation darling. So well done and so full of powerful images. Best of luck in the contest.


  • sweetgirlwa
    March 14, 2008

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    I really liked this! This was another that took me on a journey within the pic. Something totally different then what I had seen to this point. Amazing work here, thank you very much for your entry and good luck

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