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Cogs and Gears

Mechanical heart;
cogs and gears won't fall apart.

No golden lock undone
by rusty sigh or fading sun.

No fleeting spark enclosed
’neath faintly tick-ticking pulse.

No tarnished key not found,
nor fragile windup stem unwound.

No wishing for a living heart;
cogs and gears won’t fall apart.

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  • Swan song gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    and that is a good thing. Wonderful set of couplets here and well written good luck and thank you for entering