Mechanical heart;
cogs and gears won't fall apart.
No golden lock undone
by rusty sigh or fading sun.
No fleeting spark enclosed
’neath faintly tick-ticking pulse.
No tarnished key not found,
nor fragile windup stem unwound.
No wishing for a living heart;
cogs and gears won’t fall apart.
A contest entry
- GIVE ME SOMETHING TO PONDER by Swan song.
1000 points, ended March 22, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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and that is a good thing. Wonderful set of couplets here and well written good luck and thank you for entering



