as we approach each other,
a magic enamates
pulling us closer and closer
though we're freezing
I hold your waist
while you hold my face
in your hands
as we gently begin to kiss
the rain pours over
from a slight drizzle
drenching our hearts
as they entwine
in a rose
A contest entry
- Here's something interesting. by celestial.
300 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice
Rain and romance seem to go very well together, and you captured it in this poem. Nice job. -
emanates Wow Deary this is really good with excellent imagery the word at start of this is what i think you were trying to use hope this helps. Good luck in the contest. Beautiful write
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aaww
that IS the word I wanted to use. 
Thank you! 
life saver. lol 
Hope things go smoothly for you!
lovees,
transit
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