Smell the dampness
of a storm just past.
The leaves holding onto
the crystal droplets,
glittering in the moonlight.
Do you hear the giggles
and the laughter?
Do you hear the soft hum
of the hypnotic music?
Follow the path,
candels lighting the way.
You're invited to
the fairies little party,
deep within the woods.
Do you hear the voices,
whispering in your ear?
Do you hear the soft hum,
of the hypnotic music?
See the fairy-dust
sparkling in the air.
The fairies dancing
with butterfly wings
and tattered dresses.
Do you see their smiles,
teeth razor sharp?
Do you see their knives,
rusted by blood?
A contest entry
- Enter All Your Dark Writes Here (Series - II) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
1500 points, ended March 27, 2008, 95 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I was thinking lovely little fairies. Bit of a twist at the end. Interesting writing.
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Beautifully written here, the imagery is very sad but beautiful. I thought of the word 'crystal tears' whilst reading this, don't know why. Nicely done here.
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haha woo nice twist Kate
I likes! well done ^^
Luv Tam
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