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[ Honesty is the best policy ]

Honesty is the best policy
As long as your honest to your self
& the ones around you
Everthing shall fall into place

Right?

But then why is it that
No matter if i hide my feelings
Or show them

Im still torn inside
Not being able to know
Wich way to turn or run

Not really being able to know
Wich way i really want to go?

Maybe i dont want to go right
Maybe i want left
Or maybe i want to go up

Or just maybe i want to stay right here
Going down

Faster && faster i fall

Trying to find my way back up to the top

But i just cant find the top

I feel like im falling
Deeper && deeper
But for ever

Into a black hole

But im also under water
Swimming trying to get to air

But for some reason i just cant make it there

Honesty is the best policy

But for some reason
Things arent falling into place ...

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not finished just thoughts

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  • LovemeNHateme
    October 7
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    huh

    i read this over and i have to say it is one of my favs!!!


  • LovemeNHateme
    April 17, 2008
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    wow hun

    this is a good poem and its truthful i like reading your poems they make me feel like im alive.


    • Icry4YOU2mrow
      April 19, 2008
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      Aw you are alive hun. I just write to keep my mind settled. Im a dreamer, i never know when to stop


  • Twilight Moon
    March 14, 2008

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    i kno those thoughts .. they were in my head a few weeks ago! id love to read it when ur finishd! miss ya hun tc, xxxx

    • Icry4YOU2mrow
      March 24, 2008
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      Yeah i was torn between hella ppl. so i finally let my ex bf go. Then i told my bf we should stay friends && he agreed && i watched my feelings fall into place with the girl i liked. && now were together && im happy!

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