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Just Walk Away

She walks away from all of peace,
making her way towards the pitch black.
Sun in her eyes blinding her,
as she quietly slips away from grace.
As she thinks of the memories,
of him....the dreamer.
She must walk away from her destiny,
for that is the way she lives.
Shes lost so much,
won so much yet is so lonely,
that she still walks.
Says to herself,
"Why stay when destiny always falls?"
Just walk away into the pitch black.....
DARK.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 15, 2008
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    I got a sense of sorrow and despair here, beautifully done. All the best in the contest