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Can You Hear Me

 

 

 

 

Broadcasting my love

to all lonely hearts

 out there

                 out there                           

 out there                                          

                     out there

                                                         out there…because I care~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    March 14

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    awww this is beautifully written daddy and gues what I hear you loud and clear. hehe I love you lots and lots


  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    March 14

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    Oooh I love this one, very different, but well done! I like the repeat of out there, it shows how you need someone. Well written

  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 14

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    Interesting and very creative, flows smoothly. Wonderfully penned, good luck in the contest

  • Faithbound gold member
    March 14
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    This was very creative and thoughtful.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    March 14

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    What a sweet thing for you to do. Best wishes in the contest.




  • Nature Song silver member
    March 13

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    Out there...OUT THERE! Sounds like a Verizon commerical..."Can you hear me now"....CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW! ...lol...interesting poem indeed very creative Bro...~Sie


  • ardentMarch gold member
    March 13

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    oh - you are so sweet...


  • Wild Mustang
    March 13

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    Interesting... abstract... Different from your usual stuff... Or at least so I think . But still a very good piece, good luck in the contest, Michael!

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