Dangling from your neck
a dogtag of stars
pressed between your breasts
sitting now infront of me
my hands against your neck
wishing to be in another place
to make you all mine
out of my league
isn't enough to say
someone like you
would waste time with
me
stupid, useless desires
draw my mind to you
when the talking
becomes a single sound
spunky tone of voice
and not a care to the world
oh to have you be mine
Author notes
This is for someone. Not written from my view.
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To Utpala-Blue.
Wrote it myself in another perspective.
and i noticed the typo, i'm just too lazy to go back and fix it.
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Quite well done, interesting imagery and relatable feelings conveyed. Note typo: "infront" is two words, 'in front'.
I'm not sure what you mean in your notes though, "This is for someone. Not written from my view." Did you write it yourself from another perspective, or is it by someone else and posted for them?
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dogtag of stars... what an interesting image.
The rest is good too, but this really caught my attention.
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