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Alone

Tiny drop
Fleeting with grace
Caressing the breeze
Softly striking the pool below
Rippling forth to silently greet the world

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 13, 2008

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    What a gracefully written piece of poetry. Very nicely done. Congratulations on your silver trophy. Very nice.
    Kelli


  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    This is beautiful, with a wonderfully soft flow and feeling of peace to it...
    Well done!~
    Congrat's on the Silver.
    mystic


  • Age of Rain
    March 13, 2008
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    Thank you for entering my contest. Beautiful and grasping use of imagery. Best of luck!