our friendship is worth alot
were in love so lets give it a shot
i love our walks along the sand
walking along holding my hand
you say u love me but is it true
you say it is but i wouldnt have a clue
all i can give you is the love in my heart
anything for you so we wouldnt be apart
you mean the world to me
i just wish i'm not the only one to see
but all i have to say "i love you"
A contest entry
- Happiness by Lucille.
300 points, ended March 17, 2008, 19 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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its not the best poem I have ever read but it certainly is not bad at all. it has the emotion behind the work which is good. it might be one of those poems you just need to retweak now and then. great job though
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First off, a lot is two words. I like this, but not the chat lingo part of it. Otherwise you did a wonderful job.
Kelli
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