Comfort is not always good
Fact understood
Excessiveness is not all
Truth realized
But to be simple is always difficult
Author notes
Prompt : Simplicity
20 Words
A contest entry
- Quickie by GreenHrtPaleMoon.
450 points, ended March 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wanna know what you think
Comments
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nice
nice short insightful write on the prompt . . liked "Comfort is not always good" and "But to b e simple is always difficult" . . well done
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A great take on simplicity, and to do it in twenty words is a great feat. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli -
Thank you for entering my contest. Intriguing take on the prompt. Best of luck!


