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Mystery Treat

What's my favorite food, you ask?
To some, answering this may seem like a big task.
Well, I happen to have no trouble with this one.
So try to guess what it is...and have fun!

Its smooth, creamy texture did it for me.
It's often very colorful and made of ice cream.
You can put a variety of fruits in it and not have to worry
because anything tastes good in this edible flurry.

On a hot summer day, don't suffer in the heat.
Just head to your blender and concoct a treat!
Bananas, strawberries, whatever you choose,
go ahead, add it... no one's stopping you!

 

So have you guessed my favorite food?

It's quite simple with these clues.

It's a fresh fruit smoothie!

See? Was that really a toughie? 

 

Author notes

SMOOTHIES ARE THE BEST!!! Hehe. I had some trouble thinking of something to rhyme with smoothie, so I just put toughie, but do you have any suggestions for something different?

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  • nichtmich silver member
    March 15, 2008

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    Great poem and an excellent idea, letting the reader guess! I thought milkshakes until you mentioned fruit. Good rhyme and a really, really nice and funny poem!


  • KateMadness
    March 14, 2008

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    heh

    I thought is was amusing. I knew it was a smoothie right after it said ice cream. :]
    Great job, it was great to read.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    great

    lol. Don't worry about rhyming. I never expect it in my contests. I loved this. The mysteriousness in it is so cool. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
    Brian