Graphite to paper.
A point
becomes a line
becomes a curve
becomes a word.
“Love”
Simply constructed
Complex to understand.
Author notes
20 word limit; Prompt: Simplicity
rec·on·dite: dealing with very profound, difficult, or abstruse subject matter
A contest entry
- Quickie by Age of Rain.
450 points, ended March 13, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is excellent.. Congratulations on the Gold Trophy. the last two lines of your poem say it all. very simply put.
kat
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Impressive
This was worth it's weight in gold. The graphic works perfect, or is it the words work perfect with the graphic? Either way, this is one of my favorites that you have written. So few words, such great depth.
Cheryl
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This is very clever and flows nicely! A perfect little poem!
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This was really amazing. So short and yet it said all it needed to say. It's mind-blowing what some people can do with 20 words. Great write. Congrats on the gold.
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Thank you for entering my contest. This piece was truly beautiful and grasping. Best of luck!
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Very nicely done. You took the prompt and made it yours I think, and in only twenty words. Excellent.
Kelli
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