Lines were drawn
no discrepancies
shown,
yet nothing's
effortless, with affairs
of the heart
~complexity of emotions
had been forgotten.
A contest entry
- Quickie by Age of Rain.
450 points, ended March 13, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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congrats!
on the well deserved bronze cup sis...
this is excellent and the title ROCKS...
LOL!!!
been there done that...
Blessings! Tammy
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Wow what a way with words you have hun, you always capture more than most with these prompts.. well done sweets on the bronze trophy...
Karen
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Sponge
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Congrates On The Bronze,
Way to go sweet soul!
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ x
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Thank you for entering my contest. Simple and powerful take on the prompt. Best of luck!
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I alway love your entries.
And they always seem be better than mine.
Very nice.
Best of luck!
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Very well written. Makes for a great piece of poetry. I think you did a great job, good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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