The manifestation of equidistant desires,
Where an inebriated lover meets an unfaithful liar.
One is drunk with passion and overflows with lust,
The other with falsehoods and reasons unjust.
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A contest entry
- _.:~:._5 SUPER AWESOME PROMPTS_.:~:._ by Erika Elektrikka.
700 points, ended March 30, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Smoothly written, the meter/flow is flawless. Superbly penned, all the best in the contest
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Oh, well thank you. Honestly, I wasn't finished with it, but eveything I added after that just seemed like overdoing it and kind of ruined the whole thing.
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flawless
the is great i love this. REal Truth in its finest nice work dude
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