Remember when you were young,
things were much simpler.
Friends used to be there
but now they're gone.
It's final....
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A contest entry
- Quickie by Age of Rain.
450 points, ended March 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I know this feeling too, when friends were forever, I know too the feeling of watching them walk away.... thankfully there are those beauties that remain.... wonderful but sad, that we can't make things how they used to be..... well expressed
Karen
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Wonderful
That is surely the truth about "friends used to be there but now they're gone. It's final...." I like the way it leaves it to one's own prespective of what way you meant "final". Michele
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Yes, the old days were better cause we were younger and things were much simpler then. Change has taken place and things aren't like they used to be.
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Thank you for entering my contest. A very nostalgic and touching take. Best of luck!
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