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Rosebud

Flower stood by itself
single copper rosebud
he crafted a beauty
light reflections shone
gift of friendship
masterpiece with simplicity

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Prompt Simplicity

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  • KayJay
    March 13, 2008
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    Very nice rhythm and lovely imagery... Good luck!

    Ken


  • Age of Rain
    March 13, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest. Your take on the prompt was original and beautifully crafted. Best of luck!


  • Kelli Marie
    March 13, 2008

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    A great place to take simplicity. Very well written. I think handcrafted gifts of love are the best. Good luck.
    Kelli