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Four Letter Words

Love is not just another four-letter word,
It says a meaning,
Beyond all comprehension,
Beyond all understanding,
It's even beyond faith,
Loyalty and trust.
Love is an unspoken bond,
Between two lovers.
A trust that should not be broken,
A promise that should always be kept.
True love is forever.
It never dies,It never fades,
Something you must always cherish,
In your mind,body and soul.
Because, Love is not,
Just another four-letter word.

Author notes

Dragonbabyx3 is my AP name, Maybe a sister? Its up to you.

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 18

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    SPECIAL

    love is something everyone needs and wants in their lives,,,keep it growing as it works really well
    in a world of turmoiul
    thank you for this entry, good luck
    MM


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    January 18

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    Love never dies. Love never fades. Great lines of trutha and wisdom. Love indeed is to be cherished forever and ever.

    return the favor?


  • Six Foot Fall
    January 17

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    Great

    A very good write... thanks for suggesting I read it for my 100th comment... you should feel special to be blessed by my milestone, and this poem definitely earns it.


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    beautiful

    A most beautiful write writen from a most beautiful soul.
    Your heart flows over with so much love, and this can be seen so clearly in your write.
    You have explained the definition of love perfectly.
    Your write oozes with love and you have penned this so well, one can see that it comes from the heart.
    I wish you much love and happiness today and always.
    Take care my beautiful loving AP daughter.
    Love Mom ( Angel-anne aka Anne )


  • Jaffa-
    November 19, 2008

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    This was really beautiful. You captured perfectly what i was asking from this Option. The write was beautiful. But could you please put what i asked in the author notes?
    'Beyond all understanding,
    It's even beyond faith,
    Loyalty and trust.
    Love is an unspoken bond,
    Between two lovers.'
    I really loved this part. I know it's like nearly half the poem but it really was amazing. In has so much depth and meaning. Beautiful peicve and good luck in the competitions


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 28, 2008

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    Your words are so true and this
    is wonderfully written! Well done!




    Jeremy0826


  • SingPraiz4Hym
    July 27, 2008

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    I enjoyed how you expounded how those 4 little letters encompass so much more than 'just love.' Thanks for entering. Good luck.


  • SoftlyScreaming
    July 13, 2008

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    beautiful poem.. it describes the four-letter word, love, very well.. i mean, it is what it is, and you just said it for everyone to understand.. after we talk more I'll decide, but thanks for wanting to be in my family..


  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    June 24, 2008

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    thanks for sharing this great write I will be adding it to the finalists lsit. And Sorr y for the terrible typing.


  • Melissa Burns
    March 22, 2008

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    It's like sugar cubes are raining from the sky Very sweet poem - I enjoyed it thanks for entering it into my little contest


  • LissaRox
    March 16, 2008
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    I really like this poem. I think your right about love. Good job!


  • Princess-of-Chance
    March 13, 2008
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    I like this poem! It is really beautiful! I like the line A trust that should not be broken!


  • Kelli Marie
    March 13, 2008

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    I like this. Very well written. I think in line two that it should be "has" instead of "says" Other than that, a great write.
    Kelli


  • Annexed Josephine
    March 13, 2008
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    that's cool you wrote it at 13. that stuff is weird to look at when you get older. not that i'm old now- but i change so quick.

    looking forward to the poems you have currently.

    this is... pretty... 13... but thanks for posting vulnerbility.

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