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death magick

wands at the ready
eyes blazing like fire
hatred growing steady
and she's full of desire
wants to kill, wants to main
needs to hurt to end the pain
screaming curses to the wind,
feeling herself grow strong again
no more listening to his jeers,
now's the time to face her fears
screams the spell to end his life,
an incantation to ease her strife.
watches him take one last breath
they said magick flowed on the night of his death

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  • Yummy Cinnamon Bun
    March 14, 2008
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    Wow.
    This is some powerful stuff!
    Amazing job.
    Absolutely perfect flow, rhythm and rhyme.