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Happiness (Hay(na)ku)

Happiness
Is waking
Next to you

In a list

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  • Lucille
    March 17, 2008
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    I love it, short sweet and anyone can grasp the idea


  • Charity Ann
    March 14, 2008

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    Awww...I can relate. I feel the same way each morning I wake up next to my husband. Just pure contentment....best way to describe it. I really like this, good luck!


  • Kelli Marie
    March 13, 2008

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    I think this is very romantic and well written. The haynaku is very close to the haiku, not sure of the difference. Good luck.
    Kelli