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far too long.

I've lived a million lifetimes,
cried countless tears,
used up all my lifelines,
faced all of my fears.

I've danced with the devil,
drank from the golden cup,
slept off a thousand revels,
my time should be up.

I've seen what no one should see,
my innocence long gone,
i've paid an adult fee,
sold my soul for a song.

you hate me after all we've been through,
though i used to be your queen,
i've been everything to you,
and i'm only seventeen.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 13, 2008

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    Wow...a long life you have lived for such a short life. Excellent writing. Wonderful imagery you have painted.
    Kelli