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It's nearly been a year since I've been gone
but I can't let you go
no I can't let go
The desparate heart ache lingers still
in my still broken heart
beating slowly, shallow breaths
punture my lungs.  The explosions
racking my brain shout no mercy,
as I hold back tears of rage and pain.
Memories in their place streaming down.

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