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"Heart's Misery"

Languising in futility,
This heart within me,
Beats without mercy,
Broken pieces of misery.

Stabbing into this torn body,
The knowledge that you can never love me,
As you begin loving the enemy,
And blood seeps from my wounds without pity.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 13, 2008

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    Aww this is such a lovely piece so raw in emotions. I like the first 4 lines the most, describes how I've been feeling a lot recently, nicely done. Wish you luck! x