A Cold Night
She Lies Under The Moon
On A Blanket Waiting
The Clouds are Out
And They Block The View
She Longs for Them To Go
Night by Night
She Needs That Light
The Only Thing To Brighten Her Life
Day by Day
The Sun Kills Her
She Flees from It
And It's Because
Beneath bleeding moon
She Feeds on Its Light
The Only Way To Keep Alive
The Only Thing She Longs For
The Moon Pours Out For Her
And She Pours Out For It
Clouds her enemies
The Moon her protector
Author notes
1. Beneath bleeding moon, she feeds...
Quickie before I go
A contest entry
- _.:~:._5 SUPER AWESOME PROMPTS_.:~:._ by Erika Elektrikka.
700 points, ended March 30, 2008, 11 entries
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wow. I really like this poem James. Well Done =]
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I really like the third stanza, especially the third line, it really gives an insight of what this person would be like =]
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A wonderful piece, I like the direction you took on the line. Superbly penned, good luck in the contest
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this was a great write and I believe a great take on the prompt. Good write :]
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Ah, what I see in this, the sadness, that feeling that the darkness gives us safety, a balm for our pain. I liked it, it was really well done.
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Wow... This was really good. I loved it! Yay for good poetry! Lol. It flowed perfectly and painted such a beautiful pictures.
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