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Why Lie (Etheree)

Why
are you
never true
Always lying
despite not trying
You really can deceive
straight faced making me believe
that what is yours surely is mine
Can't help myself since I'm mesmerized
Can't leave your lies although hard I have tried

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  • penman gold member
    March 14, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • dustookie2
    March 13, 2008

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    I assume this is option 2... Nice take on this prompt...the 'straight faced' of the person lying and the wanting to put your trust in that person makes it hurt all the more. Good luck in the contest.