Why
are you
never true
Always lying
despite not trying
You really can deceive
straight faced making me believe
that what is yours surely is mine
Can't help myself since I'm mesmerized
Can't leave your lies although hard I have tried
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- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
525 points, ended March 14, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

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I assume this is option 2... Nice take on this prompt...the 'straight faced' of the person lying and the wanting to put your trust in that person makes it hurt all the more.
Good luck in the contest.



