I saw a man in the backseat today and he disappeared;
I heard someone say my name when I was alone in the house;
I felt spiders crawling on my arms;
I shivered in the hottest of rooms;
Maybe I'm going crazy, but I don't think you looked at me once.
Do you get it?
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Intresting write hun.I will not try and decipher it .But knowing you like I do you want it to have many meaning for different people.Great job on this one
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Oooo I love this.
I tried to read the comments to see if I was anywhere close, but no luck.
I doubt I understand your meaning behind it, but it's odd because this is exactly how I felt just a couple nights ago, even down to the spiders on my arms. Well, they were all over my body... but I felt a little bit... crazy. Like I was losing it. Obsessive.
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Ha! This makes me giggle! It makes me think of a psychotic bitch or psychotic bitch ex that is after you! I liked this a lot! (I am probably off on what you meant by this, but poetry does that to us....we all draw our own emotions from each and every piece!) Keep up the great work, Brother!
Thanks for the share!
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Is this making this person to be God or something? I think....I could be wrong though! I like it..kinda eerie, but well penned.
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No, you are quite off. Don't worry; many people don't get it. Thanks though.
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I get it, I get it!
Or at least I think I get it. God, if I'm wrong I'm going to feel really....... smart. HA. Erm....so, this was really cool, again, like all of your other poems. Totally different from an average read, but then, none of your stuff is "average", is it? That's what sets you apart. Stay on this NON-average road you're on, and you'll write yourself all the way to a best-seller. 
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Thank you so much! Very few people understood this one, but maybe it's because of my non-averageness than catches them offguard? Thank you.
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I get it now! Thank you for spelling it out for me!
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Explaining my work is my least favorite thing to do as a poet, but you're welcome.
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I know and I'm sorry. I had it right all along. I just got tired of voicing the wrong answer so I stopped voicing answers all together. Thank you for loving me enough to tell me though! <3
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You shouldn't be so delusional to think I wouldn't hunt you down for not leaving a comment on my poem...lol.
weird poem, but it was kinda cool.
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Holy crap, are you Batman?! Yeah, sorry about that. Im busy with some schoolwork right now, but next time im on, ill be sure to properly look at your poem. By the way, thanks for the comment.
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Um.... are you the man that the person saw and then disappered?? But nice depth in this poem. Has emotion and it's crzy as IDK Wat! Great Job!
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No, that actually happened to me about a month ago. It's an incident that inspired me to write the rest of the poem. And thank you very much! I know only one person who got it the first time they read it. This site seems to have more of those type of people. But again, thanks for enjoying it!
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Confused.
Haha no matter how many times I read this is still doesn't make any sense to me and you still have yet to explain it to me. I swear, you're going to be one of the authors that Mrs. Cooper has her students analyze and they get nowhere near the correct answer. lol Honestly though, I just think you're going krazy! lmfao Love ya Robert.
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To understand it, you must think like me. Good luck! Yes, that would be a great legacy: 20,000 Leagues over their heads. Love you too, babe.
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Haha I'm not so sure that I really wanna think like yiu. Sorry there babe but some of the things yiu say go over even my head!
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My mission is to mindfuck everyone. You've been my booty call for years. hahaha!
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Haha I will give you props for coming up with that one all on your own! lol But you're off to an amazing start!
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Thank you! Props recieved, props recieved. *bows*
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lol You fruitcake!
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WOw...there is a lot that could be said about this write. I can relate to some of it just by going through withdrawls from pain meds. I digress
I love the depth of this. Very nicely done.
Kelli
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Thank you! I wrote it up pretty quickly; took about five minutes.
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