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Hoist the Sails

Oh this present world
How it angers me
I fail to understand
The rules of society

I feel far adrift
In an empty sea
They fail to understand
The laws of me

You being to study
And suddenly see
You then understand
What is sinking me

Take to the sails
There's a journey ahead
Maybe I'll understand
Why I was so misled

You bring a light
To brighten my soul
I now understand
That you make me whole

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  • hidingintheshadows9
    March 18, 2008

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    wow sam this is amazing i am just guessing but is it about randy. well great write my friend. keep up the great work.