your eyes;
a vast
cathedral
of skies
And through
your kiss
upon my
lips
I am certain
I have been
baptized!
As sure as
there is
Heaven above,
I am flowing
under a fountain
of your
unconditional
love
I saw it in
your eyes;
a vast
cathedral
of skies
And through
your kiss
upon my
lips
I am certain
I have been
baptized!
As sure as
there is
Heaven above,
I am flowing
under a fountain
of your
unconditional
love
your eyes;
a vast
cathedral
of skies
And through
your kiss
upon my
lips
I am certain
I have been
baptized!
As sure as
there is
Heaven above,
I am flowing
under a fountain
of your
unconditional
love
Author notes
The poem, Baptized in Love, is about the total immersion of one's heart and soul into a love that rises above any and all ever known
In a list
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired-Beautiful by sweetgirlwa.
1500 points, ended March 20, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WoW
I love this write. So beautifully written, and I love how you linked Spirituality with love, Brilliant.
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I love it. Such beauty within your words. You really did an excellent job on this one.
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Gorgeous
Simple and sweet, This is a beautiful piece!!!!!!!! Keep up the great work
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This is a beautiful piece, I'm not sure about the line breaks because if as a poet you breathe in those spaces of line breaks (as we were taught in school) then I just died when I hyperventilated lol. But I loved this. Best to you in the contest
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SIGH!!!
Ohhhhhh, how beautiful is this!! I know those feelings quite well. You did an awesome job on this one!! Truly beautiful my dear friend...
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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Excellent
What a very touching creation. So very well done. Congrats on the honorable mention. -
This is so short and simple, yet amazing!! I love the emotion in it and the deep meaning of each word! Great job and best of luck in the contest!
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This is very emotional and nice.
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Nicely penned. I like the idea of being baptized in unconditional love. Good luck.
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WOW! Beautifully penned, though I never expected anything less from you. It has been too long I have missed ya! Where in the world have you been hiding?
lol.
Congrats on your hm.... beautiful work!
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Only1love4ever-Reply
This is gorgous!! May i say that again!! this is GORGEOUS!! Oh you did such a wonderful job with this poem. I love it. Every word, every sentence, it rhymes, it flows, its structured. And oh the love and the fantasy and the words you chose. I love it!! Great job! Thank you and best of luck!! :] -
this is a beautiful poem
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What a joy!
Ahhhhhh! Wondrous is the feeling to be amid the hands of grace... I loved this poem....
and I am fonder even, that that this blessing, you were given...
Great poem... soothing, and vastly exciting...
Passionate to the end...
~ James ~
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I loved this. It was simple yet told a wonderful story. I loved the line "I am flowing under a fountain of your unconditional love." I hope that we all find that someday. Great work, thank you very much for your entry.
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i luv this peom!! it is very true when u get bapitized and mean it so thanxx god 4 tha
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This is a very good take on the picture.Your words flow so beautifully.You penned a brilliant piece of poetry.Well done indeed
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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Beautiful, just beautiful...sunshine
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A very romantic and well versed piece--Excellent!
Best of luck in the contest!
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I think that you have done the picture proud and I love the reference to the baptism of love. Good luck in the contest. Val
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Very Good!
I love the way the poem flows and I really think you captured what the pictures was conveying to you! -
What a lovely tribute to someone you love..it is gorgeous..Niaish Ma eno from all your Children
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Beautiful Write this is very nice. Good luck with it in the contest and Niaish for sharing in the group
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This is another of your very lovely writes. I am a fan of your work because I can't do this style at all. Very well done and niaish for sharing it with us here.
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A truly great poem, the emotions and love flowed with every line, you have done an outstanding job, blessings John, Niaish for sharing
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Wow what an amzing write!! Such love and joy within your words. Beautiful imagery and emotions. I so enjoyed reading my friend. Niaish for sharing Theresa
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SWEET!
Loved your poem! I thought it was religious and sexy in all the same poem.
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This is outstanding writing. Wording is full of emotional energy sparked by deep love. It flowed like the fountain you describe. Beautiful work, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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perfectwords to match the picture.
This is beyond beautiful.
" I am flowing
under a fountain
of your
unconditional
love ".
those words just make me go Awww.
Good luck in the contest,yet I don't think
you'll need it.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Brilliant!
Your elegant words captures the image to perfection.
I love the flow and rhyme [Flawless]
A spirtual heart-warming piece that pleases the soul.
Well penned
Bravo!
Wish you the best in the contest!
Much love
Many blessings
David
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The Poet speaks of emotional feelings felt deep withing a heart that sings the joys of feeling alive awash with the embrace of anothers love for her. A wonderful flow to this poem that brings a pleasure to those that read to know love is still alive in this world of bad news. well presented (HM)
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Ouu, Me Likes This A-lot~
Such a wonder of love flows from the fountain of your sweet soul. 
Thanks for sharing, you penned another beauty here.
All the best within the contest as well!
Brother Timothy
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Wow!!
Now this one flowedddddddddddd with a lot of energy and Love that rhyme
Beauty of a piece!!
Wooooooooo Hoooooooooo
Oy!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Excellent
What a touching and romantic creation. so very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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SO SWEET AND TOUCHING!
Just like always your sweet words brings out the tender and loving feelings in ones heart. I always find myself in this special place of quiet and peace when I read your poems.
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Oooh, beautiful!
I love the whole theme here... It's just so beautiful and cute. A really great love poem!
~Cassie
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