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shining star.






I am not a master
of love poems
and measured rhyme,
my fingers don't produce
a rhythm to put my heartbeats
to paper,
but he is an angel
amongst men,
my shining star
and his presence,
his heart makes me
into a poem that dares to hope.








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  • timberwolf1313
    March 17, 2008

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    tasha that was so butifull wow i love it i wish i could write like that but everytime i try to write something butifull it onlyt comes out sad you get a smilly face ;-)