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as pretty as a butterfly



she is
as pretty as a butterfly
so gentle
especally when with flowers it mingles
as pretty as a butterfly
yet,can't fly too high
spreading happiness and joy
spreading love and hope
prettier than a butterfly
isn't she?
that's why he was singing for her
the little girl
round the corner
was prettier than all beauty in the world
                            Yassmin Elnazer

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  • cindy4
    April 17, 2008
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    beauty

    This is a very nice poem.


  • Nobody126
    March 27, 2008
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    Beauty

    Ye nice thought. so you have also written the name of the girl at the end of the poem.


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    March 14, 2008
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    woww i really liked reading this yassmin great job as pretty as a butterfly wondeful job